Personal Essay

My name is Jeremy Goldzal, and I am a first term freshman here at Baruch College. I am 17 years old and I live in Brooklyn. I graduated from Yeshiva South Shore in Long Island. I live at home with my parents, one brother, and two sisters. I am the second child in my family. My family is Orthodox Jewish. I speak English and Hebrew fluently. I chose this college because I like making money and this school is mainly for business majors. The location is great for a school like this because its surrounded by businesses and that is what most of us are here for, to get an education in the business world. College is not as bad as I thought it would be, and I'm enjoying myself so far. I work as a waiter for a watering service. I enjoy it because I get to meet all different types of people wherever I go. I plan on majoring in sports management, marketing, or banking. I enjoy following all the professional sports, lifting weights, playing basketball, hockey, football, and baseball. I love to attend rock concerts, next week I am going to see Lenny Kravitz at Madison Square Garden. I love listening to Metallica and Ozzy Osbourne. My favorite movies include Mallrats, and American History X.

My name is Jeremy Goldzal, and I am a first term freshman here at Baruch College. I am 17 years old and I live in Brooklyn. I graduated from Yeshiva South Shore in Long Island. I live at home with my parents, one brother, and two sisters. I am the second child in my family. My family is Orthodox Jewish. I speak English and Hebrew fluently. I chose this college because I like making money and this school is mainly for business majors. The location is great for a school like this because its surrounded by businesses and that is what most of us are here for, to get an education in the business world. College is not as bad as I thought it would be, and I'm enjoying myself so far. I work as a waiter for a watering service. I enjoy it because I get to meet all different types of people wherever I go. I plan on majoring in sports management, marketing, or banking. I enjoy following all the professional sports, lifting weights, playing basketball, hockey, football, and baseball. I love to attend rock concerts, next week I am going to see Lenny Kravitz at Madison Square Garden. I love listening to Metallica and Ozzy Osbourne. My favorite movies include Mallrats, and American History X.

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